tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post1411027734039782687..comments2024-01-12T19:31:12.510-03:00Comments on Poesia Torta: #537Kenia Santoshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12893148474912410033noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-70312805365554232852012-03-27T19:37:36.025-03:002012-03-27T19:37:36.025-03:00interesting concept that your departures build the...interesting concept that your departures build the roads. i like that. very poetic<br /><br /><a href="http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2011/07/08/joy-garrison-programs-command-highlight/" rel="nofollow">Joy Garrison Programs: Command Highlight</a>zongrikhttp://zongrik.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-57569547176641730232012-03-27T19:20:37.943-03:002012-03-27T19:20:37.943-03:00Great word play and wonderful images...nicely done...Great word play and wonderful images...nicely done.Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-17560404908162573282012-03-27T15:18:30.318-03:002012-03-27T15:18:30.318-03:00Yes, the beginning is an image intriguing!Yes, the beginning is an image intriguing!Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-3205484381760775382012-03-27T14:37:13.257-03:002012-03-27T14:37:13.257-03:00Amo TUDO o que vc escreve. Sensibilidade sem fim.....Amo TUDO o que vc escreve. Sensibilidade sem fim...parabéns!Karine Tavareshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01193046518363163725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-55059495178445252692012-03-27T12:36:59.921-03:002012-03-27T12:36:59.921-03:00absolutely luv the first line of this poem! thank ...absolutely luv the first line of this poem! thank you! :)Jacqueline Dowseyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08273783523658154190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-983471519543920822012-03-26T22:47:37.671-03:002012-03-26T22:47:37.671-03:00Wow Kenia,
such an emotional tug of war in your wo...Wow Kenia,<br />such an emotional tug of war in your words!<br />I hope butterflies!<br />Wonderful imagery~Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-37124266875985669542012-03-26T21:35:19.680-03:002012-03-26T21:35:19.680-03:00I love "whether days come with butterflies or...I love "whether days come with butterflies or screaming demons"....and "I make roads out of departures". That is a brilliant line. We all do, actually, but I never thought of it that way before.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-17092257468720512282012-03-26T21:29:22.137-03:002012-03-26T21:29:22.137-03:00These pieces are wonderfully crafted little gems, ...These pieces are wonderfully crafted little gems, soft yet evocative.W.k. kortashttp://wkkortas.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-1708263599281178442012-03-26T21:13:16.093-03:002012-03-26T21:13:16.093-03:00Como caminhar sem partir? Este é o truque da estra...Como caminhar sem partir? Este é o truque da estrada, aprender a seguir.Poeta da Colinahttp://www.poetadacolina.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-20126167505954571222012-03-26T19:55:30.520-03:002012-03-26T19:55:30.520-03:00I specially like:
I build roads
out of departu...I specially like: <br /><br />I build roads<br />out of departures<br /><br />intriguing word play ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-28820669837712352042012-03-26T17:27:18.513-03:002012-03-26T17:27:18.513-03:00"I build roads
out of departures"
for ..."I build roads<br />out of departures" <br /><br />for some reason that especially speaks to me, but I agree with Kerry about the marbles...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-31917168275793106642012-03-26T00:58:40.318-03:002012-03-26T00:58:40.318-03:00Um dia você ganha todas as bolinhas de gude de den...Um dia você ganha todas as bolinhas de gude de dentro do triângulo formado por estradas.<br /><br />Isso tá bonito demais!<br /><br />Beijo, Kenia.Marcantoniohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04238379706308651371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-70467380127971997982012-03-25T17:45:24.670-03:002012-03-25T17:45:24.670-03:00Lindo demais Kenia...
Um caminho repleto de amanhe...Lindo demais Kenia...<br />Um caminho repleto de amanheceres com borboletas coloridas...<br />BeijoAlém da Porteirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04993916790903125508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-82468302920746561662012-03-25T14:14:28.157-03:002012-03-25T14:14:28.157-03:00...spend all my wishes in marbles...
These line h......spend all my wishes in marbles...<br /><br />These line hurt to read, especially for one who has lived through too many departures. It's hard to see the butterflies when your heart is broken.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.com