tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post3128407922632406288..comments2024-01-12T19:31:12.510-03:00Comments on Poesia Torta: #540Kenia Santoshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12893148474912410033noreply@blogger.comBlogger35125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-88920397921992185032012-05-08T20:42:34.793-03:002012-05-08T20:42:34.793-03:00Doeu tanto... Lindo.Doeu tanto... Lindo.Michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09284932244671881811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-76992123578701033032012-05-04T10:41:15.663-03:002012-05-04T10:41:15.663-03:00¡Ay!
Very painful reading this¡Ay!<br />Very painful reading thisAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06061151694133927796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-58477161978496404272012-04-25T11:31:05.200-03:002012-04-25T11:31:05.200-03:00Oh how I feel this...nicely done.Oh how I feel this...nicely done.Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-23916807512243649462012-04-24T21:14:24.988-03:002012-04-24T21:14:24.988-03:00Sentimental in the best way!Sentimental in the best way!Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-70321648180864420212012-04-24T10:43:04.769-03:002012-04-24T10:43:04.769-03:00Sad but written in a beautiful way. We should keep...Sad but written in a beautiful way. We should keep our stars close : )Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17564210453026152076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-91839388181320996862012-04-24T03:45:16.047-03:002012-04-24T03:45:16.047-03:00Ooooh I love it. Anytime you can use astronomy in ...Ooooh I love it. Anytime you can use astronomy in poetry, I'm there! Especially if you do it so beautifully!M. A. S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/04050723085916361298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-90175067250939302592012-04-23T22:00:49.411-03:002012-04-23T22:00:49.411-03:00Really good work here. I love the translation and...Really good work here. I love the translation and the original side by side. Many times I feel poetry can only truly be harnessed in it's original tongue, and how certain languages make anything sound like beauty echoing off the page. And rarely do I find the translations ever matching the wonder I find in the original voice, but your's is fantastic. Such an amazing write here. ThanksAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-19832503472840667662012-04-23T21:33:37.931-03:002012-04-23T21:33:37.931-03:00This is wistful, melancholy without descending int...This is wistful, melancholy without descending into saccharine weepiness. There is no screaming or rending of garments, and the piece is more powerful for that.W.k. kortashttp://wkkortas.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-12421358047219480282012-04-23T18:46:18.868-03:002012-04-23T18:46:18.868-03:00I like the contrast of the closeness and distance,...I like the contrast of the closeness and distance, and use of outer space as metaphor. <br /><br />Nice work ~<br /><br />Also wanted to let you know that my piece is for your wednesday challenge last week. Thanks for a wonderful prompt on Ana.Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-26408444283607939822012-04-23T18:04:24.360-03:002012-04-23T18:04:24.360-03:00I feel the sadness..I too feel the pain of things ...I feel the sadness..I too feel the pain of things being so far away. I lived away from my parents for years. I missed so much and now they are gone. This was sad but so beautiful.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-79782391045348330802012-04-23T17:44:42.499-03:002012-04-23T17:44:42.499-03:00A distância mais dolorosa é a que não se mede com ...A distância mais dolorosa é a que não se mede com réguas... Quando o coração se distancia, aí sim... estabelece-se a verdadeira e cruel distância...<br />Lindo como sempre Kenia...<br />Beijo e boa semana!Além da Porteirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04993916790903125508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-22474517138928631862012-04-23T16:06:26.790-03:002012-04-23T16:06:26.790-03:00It doesn't happen all at onece either...kind o...It doesn't happen all at onece either...kind of lulls you into a sense that its alright til one day, whoops, noone is close anymore. I so love your stuff.Herotomosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-89897786884112352932012-04-23T14:17:14.061-03:002012-04-23T14:17:14.061-03:00exquisite! this line really spoke to me: "The...exquisite! this line really spoke to me: "The universe chalked<br />on the sidewalk<br />at the front door."Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-27314620761785329372012-04-23T13:36:34.488-03:002012-04-23T13:36:34.488-03:00this could well have been named 'the astronome...this could well have been named 'the astronomer's wife'.lovely lines.quite moving.reminds me of a bengali line which might be translated as "just like stars, we grow lightyears apart"...same feelings, different spaces...the incredible unity of literature!Abin Chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17534639363132246570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-7071338902583842422012-04-23T13:18:38.154-03:002012-04-23T13:18:38.154-03:00"your arm
an extension
of my body,
your hear..."your arm<br />an extension <br />of my body,<br />your heart<br />beat in my chest."<br /><br />I love the intimacy and closeness of this contrasting with the rest galactic, Kenia! Great poem!!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-734232109427040562012-04-23T11:52:34.946-03:002012-04-23T11:52:34.946-03:00So true!So true!Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-32917447338114512662012-04-23T11:29:43.847-03:002012-04-23T11:29:43.847-03:00I enjoyed reading the Spanish as well as the Engli...I enjoyed reading the Spanish as well as the English interpretation. Both sound lovely rolling off my tongue. One hundred steps, universe chalked on the sidewalk, growing old looking out the window---these are all powerful images. This is fantastic.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-27776344400475544832012-04-23T10:50:38.990-03:002012-04-23T10:50:38.990-03:00So beautiful, full of longing... I especially like...So beautiful, full of longing... I especially like the first stanza.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-65280220008528329702012-04-23T08:32:43.034-03:002012-04-23T08:32:43.034-03:00I really love this poem, it has the essence of may...I really love this poem, it has the essence of may of the odes I read while building my craft... and it is amazing to experience it in two tonues. Thank you for sharing this.Semaphorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945917520773585129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-21165640044683625232012-04-22T10:11:54.532-03:002012-04-22T10:11:54.532-03:00Units of measurement are changing fast. Think of M...Units of measurement are changing fast. Think of MB, GB, and now TB for instance. Space stays the same, men reinvent distances. <br /><br />Kiss you beauty.Kenia Santoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12893148474912410033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-28934378358558939032012-04-22T10:07:55.239-03:002012-04-22T10:07:55.239-03:00<3 Thanks babe.<3 Thanks babe.Kenia Santoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12893148474912410033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-73031287500029438422012-04-22T10:07:34.574-03:002012-04-22T10:07:34.574-03:00O problema são as unidades de medida ficando cada ...O problema são as unidades de medida ficando cada vez maiores.Kenia Santoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12893148474912410033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-46649405844670855812012-04-22T10:06:46.373-03:002012-04-22T10:06:46.373-03:00Tom,
thanks for stopping by and caring enough to ...Tom,<br /><br />thanks for stopping by and caring enough to leave such a lovely comment. I am a sad person I guess. I wish I could always share happiness and hope, but I still have to set my eyes to search for these things. They are like fireflies to me, they hide in places I don't often visit. Maybe when I grow old and move into the countryside or a mountain top. I'll meet them then.<br /><br />Thanks again. :)Kenia Santoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12893148474912410033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-1510877212424174352012-04-22T09:42:48.698-03:002012-04-22T09:42:48.698-03:00wow, you take a sentiment and then expand it in ju...wow, you take a sentiment and then expand it in just the way that saddens you, magically accomplishedTomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10948978798395906663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-333585877614841107.post-19545423847559957052012-04-21T23:02:27.462-03:002012-04-21T23:02:27.462-03:00don't know much what to say besides 'thank...don't know much what to say besides 'thank you'. I'm really thankful for you stopping by and reading me. Because you do. :)Kenia Santoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12893148474912410033noreply@blogger.com