(Image by Brandon Laney)
Espero pelo céu de março
e suas estrelas
conhecidas por tantos nomes
quantos os amores divididos.
Se conecto os pontos
indo de Vênus ao cair da noite
até Ursa menor,
tenho uma ponte até você.
I wait for March's nightsky
and its stars that
go under as many names
as there are lovers apart
If I connect the dots
starting on Venus
and moving on
to Ursa Minor,
I draw a bridge to you.
(posted to dVerse poets open link night week 33)
smiles...the night is so clear here that the stars stretch beyond the edge of the eye...nice closing line...very nice
ReplyDelete"If I connect the dots…I draw a bridge to you" I so get this!
ReplyDeleteI wish I could read your poetry in the original language but alas, though my language (Spanish) is similar to yours, it only gets me so far and I content myself in English.
Oooh.. your words always touch my heart, Kenia. Your simple style contains a wealth of emotion and experience.
ReplyDeleteSublime!
ReplyDeleteBeijos
Maya Quaresma
I love this.
ReplyDeleteReminds me of the princess and the cowherd story. And that's awesomes.
Great work here.
as estrelas nos fazem erguer a cabeça
ReplyDeletecontemplar multidões
para encontrar a única face do verdadeiro amor
belo poema mana
abração
That's a lovely way to see the stars:
ReplyDeleteand its stars that
go under as many names
as there are lovers apart
Stunning. As a closet romantic and an amateur astronomer, your verse spoke to me with intimate knowledge. May your star-line-connect-the-dots lead to magic.
ReplyDeleteA delicadeza da tua poesia SEMPRE me encanta, Kenia.
ReplyDeleteUm beijo saudoso,
Talita.
So beautiful, Kenia! A bridge of stars, of love: pure poetry
ReplyDeleteParabéns querida você ganhou o sorteio da blusa em comemoração aos 2anos de blog WORDS ARE LOST. Entre em contato pelo msn ou facebook para me passar as informações necessárias para enviar. bjs :)
ReplyDeletei like the connect the dogs concept
ReplyDeleteSublime poema! O céu ainda é o melhor espaço para sonhar e agradecer...
ReplyDeleteParabéns pela simplicidade das palavras e pela riqueza do conteúdo!
(((Abraços)))