Não é segredo -
eu sou uma pobre alma perdida
já faz algum tempo
vagando por esse mundo
de pobres almas perdidas
e corações partidos.
It is no secret -
a poor lost soul I've been
for quite long now
wandering in this world of
poor lost souls.
A poor lost soul in a world of lost souls should have no problem finding a companion.
ReplyDeleteTake care, dear Kenia.
That's what everybody believes, my dear Andreas. I'm puzzled, in a world of lost souls, everybody looking for love and a half, just a few find it. Lucky them, I say.
ReplyDelete(you got the mood of the poem. It's all about hope, because in a world of lost souls I'll find a match anytime, and also, it's better to be a lost soul than a broken heart.)
Kisses!
I'm another lost soul honey!! Loved the nature of the poetry, loss but optimism, tanka is like a haiku or a senryu you count the syllables. I'm not an expert but I think I like them! This is perfection :) thankyou Kenia x
ReplyDeleteIt's a lovely poem, reminds me a bit of Saigyo, and that ain't bad!
ReplyDeleteLady Nyo
Não, não é segredo. Mas era antes de o escrever. Um abraço.
ReplyDeleteclever and meaningful !
ReplyDeleteTodo mundo precisa de um encontro.
ReplyDeletethis reminded me of a wise quotation:
ReplyDelete[...] and if we're lost, we're lost together
Love you.
Oh, you're right - in the poetry blogworld you have a lot of companions ;-)
ReplyDeleteSem cerol, sem sangue, sem degolados.
ReplyDeletePoesia perfeita para dia dos namorados.
Ou, em versão menos moribunda:
Conservou sua melancolia-depressiva-excessivamente-existencialista sobre o que toca o amor...
(Eu levantei o humor, nada, mas nada de cult breguinha).
como isso é triste... e como é verdadeiro...
ReplyDeletePoor lost souls and broken hearts
ReplyDeleteExcellent
Thanks sweet friend
i really love this! great tanka.
ReplyDeleteamazingly said !! I love the pics you use on your blog .. wow
ReplyDeletee assim vamos todos, carregando alegrias e trsitezas no peito!
ReplyDeleteKenia, I'm not lost; follow me.
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