Se você tivesse
ouvido
a minha serenata
ontem
com a lua alta no céu
e o meu jeito
bem humorado
pendurei estrelas
sorridentes
no azul escuro
o silêncio da madrugada
em meus olhos
amor,
eu preparei tudo
para você.
Had you listened
to my serenade
yesterday
how high
the moon
and my spirits
I hanged
smiling stars in
the dark blue
the stillness of night
in my nothing but
ordinary eyes
I prepared everything
for you,
love.
Posted to One Shot Wednesday over at One Stop Poetry
How romantic
ReplyDeleteOh, this guy gets me writing about love the way I wish I could live it. Kiss you, Mari!
ReplyDeleteSimpática que preparou tudo.
ReplyDeleteAgora que li me enchi de alegria. Talvez logo ainda possa ver esses laivos de azul no Céu e a cor dourada de todas as estrelas.
Nunca te canses e continua a sonhar..
A wonderful stillness about it. Just that motion with the arm, hanging stars. And a song, as I imagine it, softly hummed. I love "How high the moon".
ReplyDeleteBe well, dear Kenia.
É esse o sentimento poético dos que amam: que o mundo, o dia, a noite foram foram preparados para a espera. E nada fica esquecido, cada estrela contada foi, sim, lembrada na hora de arrumar a casa.
ReplyDeleteBeijos,
O que não se faz por amor! rs
ReplyDeleteOh so romantic, Kenia. I love the image of hanging the stars. Lucky guy!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully romantic poem, Kenia.
ReplyDeletePamela
very lovely...i hope the recipient smiled wider than i...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Kenia! You always write great poems! Keep them coming my love! :)
ReplyDeleteAmazing little love ditty again KEnia, you do these so well and prolifically. Love you my sweet friend, catch a :* on the breeze from me x
ReplyDeleteah beautiful - i like how you hanged smiling stars in the dark blue...lovely
ReplyDeleteI love your love poetry, kenia--so simple and real, and your eyes may seem ordinary to you, but they see the hanging stars and the high moon that to many are invisible.
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful Kenia. Love & Hugs! ♥
ReplyDeleteLindo dom, o seu, de pendurar estrelas para iluminar a escuridão.
ReplyDeletePara descobrir que jamais estaria preparado para você.
ReplyDeleteSo romantic Kenia, thanks!
ReplyDeleteA amor torna-nos deuses criadores de mundos onde impera o encanto!
ReplyDeleteE que encanto têm estas palavras, Kenia.
Tudo de bom,
Samuel Pimenta.
Que bela montagem em nome do amor!
ReplyDeleteDear Kenia
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful portrait and I could relate to the lines...
'I hanged
smiling stars in
the dark blue'
Perfect... I enjoyed it so much... Thanks for sharing.
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/02/whispers-another-kind-of-valentines-day.html
Romantic images ... I like it. Beautiful little gem.
ReplyDeleteI love the beauty of your writing...that touch of Brasilian romance....My husband is traveling to Sao Paulo on Tuesday and to Recife...this will be his 3rd trip on business....he loves your country and you people....hopefully I will make it there too....blessings...bkm
ReplyDeleteEu não sei, mas isso tudo me soou tão suicida...
ReplyDeleteAndo meio esquisito.