Saturday, February 19, 2011

#444

(image by Kenia Cris)

Hoje cedo
um jato cortou o céu
em duas partes.

A lua cheia
observava Vênus
desaparecer na imensidão.


Early this morning
a jet plane cut the sky
into two halves.

Full moon watched
Venus fade away
into the distance.


24 comments:

  1. There's something unsettling about this cut, this line. It's like a scar. It speaks of pain.

    And then the moon watching Venus fade away, like a lover watching a beloved leave. There's a pain to that as well; a scar that can't be seen.

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  2. E o seu olhar cortou o poema em dois belos haicais!

    Beijo, Kenia.

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  3. E meio que derrepente não me vi em nenhum dos dois lados. Mas não desesperei.

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  4. ai moça!

    também acredito estar vi(vendo) desventuras lunares.

    beijo meu!

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  5. olha quem chega -
    a chuva sobre a casa
    faz imenso barulho ...

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  6. céu nublado:
    mas o vento espanta
    toda esta solidão...

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  7. The eyes and ears wake up to the beginning of another wonderful day.

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  8. Great poem, I am speechless. good good :) keep writing
    The image does well with the poem and gives it an essence worth reading.
    Very well written.
    Sarah, you know, when I read the title, I thought it must be another of those clichéd poem but no it wasn't. In fact, it was so brilliant that I even decided to comment. Well done.
    Also, read my poem:
    http://kratik1987.blogspot.com/2011/02/just-me.html
    Cheers :)
    Kratik

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  9. lovers in the same sky yet apart ,, sigh !

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  10. Incríveis imagens capturadas pelo seu olhar poético.
    Belíssimas imagens retratadas por suas palavras!

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  11. Adorei as imagens no teu poema.Loved the images.Great poem.

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  12. Sou da opinião do Marcantónio. Abraço.

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  13. This is beautiful. Such a clearcut image.

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  14. Wow, I love this poem and the addition of the photo is wonderful. What a way of stating things you have.

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  15. truly enjoyed it.

    the word cut is used brilliantly here.
    sharp and smart piece.

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  16. Instigante.
    Creio ser esta a melhor palavra para descrever seu cantinho.

    já add para seguir, gostei do que encontrei aqui.

    Bjs da lua e uma deliciosa semana.

    =)

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  17. Nice work...capture those images!

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  18. Oh, this is so simple...yet so beautiful!

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  19. Adorei o texto e as fotos ficaram sensacionais. Belíssima combinação!

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  20. To start with, I love the header :)

    You reminded me of my early morning walks with my dad when i was young. I always used to ask him how come there's that weird line in the sky? wonderful times whose were. Thanks for the memories!

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  21. Conhecendo seu blog hj...

    Mais essa descorberta de hj, e quando se conhece algo novo, o mundo parece tornar-se um pouquinho menor e a gente um pouco maior...

    Gostei daqui...

    Post singelo, simples...
    Gosto disso...

    Convido vc a conhecer meu trabalho...
    http://mailsonfurtado.com

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