Sunday, January 30, 2011

#436



Caminho
quando preferia flutuar
no espaço,

As pessoas vivem como cometas
e morrem como estrelas.

Às vezes me sinto tão velha
quanto o universo,

A estrada que não escolhi
também pode ser lida
nas minhas pegadas.



I walk
when I’d rather float in space,

People live like comets
and die like stars.

Sometimes I feel as old
as the universe,

The road I have not taken
also showing
on my footprints.


My piece for One Shoot Sunday

25 comments:

  1. Powerful imagery.
    The road not taken is as much a part of us as the one we're on. For some it's even more real.
    This is the most beautiful take on this prompt I have read, Kenia.

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  2. Extremamente demais.
    Lindo isso: "As pessoas vivem como cometas
    e morrem como estrelas."
    É o tipo de coisa que só se encontra aqui!
    Abraço!

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  3. As if the tracks them selves lead to and connect with the universe. Love it.

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  4. live like comets, die like stars...this is a brilliant write...

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  5. i hear the longing in your words - for floating in space..very beautiful words cris..and sometimes i feel as old as the universe as well...smiles
    have a lovely sunday

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  6. A vida é repleta de caminhos que não escolhemos. Caminhar é preciso, independente da estrada.

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  7. A estrada que não escolhi...
    Será que sempre vou pensar nela?
    Muita saudade de vc moça!!!
    Beijo grande e aparace vai!!!!
    Mi

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  8. Another poem to think about when I look at the night sky. I hope I learn to live more like a comet.

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  9. At leadt you carve your own path honey, your footprints although fading, will leave an echoed memory x

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  10. E se esse é nosso destino, vamos explodir nesse espaço.

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  11. Kenia...

    Você sempre ótima, sensível e profunda.
    Abraços meus.!!!

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  12. Very introspective. I like your philosophy.

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  13. This is incredibly beautiful and powerful. I especially love "people live like comets and die like stars". Wow!

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  14. Lovely. I particularly like the reference to roads not taken. Your perspective gave me pause to consider that.

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  15. I really enjoyed this Kenia.

    "People live like comets
    and die like stars."

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  16. A beautiful piece of writing. Says so much in so few words; excellent.

    'Sometimes I feel as old
    as the universe,...'

    Very nice. :-)

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  17. Astronômico. Versos altamente inspirados, sobretudo esses aqui:

    "As pessoas vivem como cometas
    e morrem como estrelas."

    Bem, agora fui eu que me lembrei de Robert Frost, Kenia.

    Beijão.

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  18. welcome join us tonight within an hour, have fun!
    Thanks for the inspirations and dedications..

    Happy Writing!

    ;)

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  19. Simply beautiful piece... thank you for leaving your footsteps here.

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  20. Beautiful work, Kenia. I also am impressed with your blog, its design, and its bilingual quality.

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  21. Se não há estradas, seus pés indicam o caminho (embora haja muita grama a ser pisada).

    Estava faltando onda em mim.
    Mas isso me banhou de interesse...

    Boas margens.

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  22. I love this - mystic, mythic... all of it, but the final lines really pull at me:

    The road I have not taken
    also showing
    on my footprints.

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